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Blemish

I can't get rid of it -
The moments in my mind play in continuous reels
As I close my eyes and fight back the tears.
The relentless tears are burning like fire
As they fall upon frozen flesh
And turn into pearls of sorrow and regret.
The fearful plague that spread through me at the thought of the truth
Has made it even more an inferno:
And all I want,
Is the music to play instead of the nightmarish screams of a blank stare.

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    December 31, 2009

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    You have drawn an wonderful image of your feelings using nice metaphors like pearls of sorrows.Music is surely one of the best medicine to take care of a burnt heart.I hope you give yourself enough time to forget reeling truths which are no more real in life.Let time heals your wounds as it always does.Hope you get rid of bad patches sooner.


    • Tawni Risley silver member
      December 31, 2009

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      Thank you!! Wow, it was really nice of you to read an older poem!!
      Thank you for reading and commenting. And I'm so glad you understood my metaphors. Beautiful mind you have.
      Tawni


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 25, 2008

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    the sorrow of this and there is something else that i don't even think has a name yet, but i think you expressed it all in your words, keep it flowing