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Everyday Means Loving You

everyday wouldn't be this way,
without someone like you in my life.
for everyday is a bright new day,
waking up with your sweet love.

my day is incomplete without you,
that i can't even put a smile on my face.
loving you each day that i'm living,
brings happiness to my sad soul.

when you say your words of love,
and expressing the way you want.
i float and be blind around,
can't see them just you in my mind.

whenever my soul gets blue,
you are there to touch my heart.
bring back the colors of this soul,
and your love makes it glow.

the comfort feeling that you give,
is enough to ease the pain i have.
for there is no one else but you,
you that makes love so true.

i promise to take care of you,
love you with all my heart my boo.
i will sing to you the sweetest lullaby,
end this day by kissing you goodnight.

but this does not end with goodnight,
for we will wake up together with our kisses.
start the day with the soft sweet sound,
of our hearts that are beating as one.

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kyrkx

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    I would suggest you send this to Blue Mt Arts Press this is very much the way they do their gift cards well done


    • kyrkx
      July 15, 2008
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      where i could contact the Blue Mt Arts Press? how could i send my piece.. tanx


  • z etoile
    July 11, 2008

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    Great job. I loved the last lines

    but this does not end with goodnight,
    for we will wake up together with our kisses.
    start the day with the soft sweet sound,
    of our hearts that are beating as one.

    thank you for entering the contest.


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 10, 2008
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    ooooh...wow! what an absolutely beautiful poem. I adore it, the unfettered love and romance of it makes my heart beat just a little bit faster, and makes me wish it was written for me ...superb!

    Thanks so much for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • Sound of Madness
    July 9, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you much luck. This is a very cute piece, very beautiful. I enjoyed reading it.


  • JustFallingApart
    July 4, 2008
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    nice write, thanks for entering

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