I 'd cry to the flowers but they never listen
I'd mourn the magpie's cry but oh, how they glisten
when it's raining outside and inside too
when I'm telling you that I love you
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It's nice to hear your voice again
where you going and where you been
I thought you left me alone in June
just when our love was in bloom
I laid on my pillow, staring at stars
Pluto, Jupiter, Venus & Mars
were the things that crossed my mind
to truth & reality, I was blind
I pick off the petals from the rose you brought
I'm dumbfounded in pollen that my allergies have caught
I want you to love me but I don't know where
so late at night, it's your face that I stare
I'd rather look at you than be here, alone
I hate waiting for you, your call on the phone
just kiss me and hold me- caress my body and soul
'cus being with you makes me feel whole
Author notes
My boyfriend made this into a song on Myspace. It's flippen Rad. Once I get the link, I will link it.
hit it.
Comments
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Very good rhyme here...Your theme about being love sick is really cute. A familiar happening when couples fall in love young like you....Good penning as well
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Thank you. That's sort of what it's like too- love sick lol. I get lonely when I have to be gone during the week to go to school and he works.
Thanks for your comment :-)
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