closer you stalk
later my sweet
when night falls
no more talk
ill find you
my pain releasing tears
cut me like ice
frozen cracks beat silence
in the rythym of my fears
i need you
an eternity begins
ill trade pain for love
punish my desire
covet our sins
take me now
[Chorus]
agony exquisite... yearning
answering passions call
razors edge.... pulse rising
embrace me... take it all
were colliding
two souls yearning
tongues twist
sweet churning
the burning
my bodys at critical mass
shaking from your touch
dont let me go
my fuse lights fast
i open the door
hard an on course
trembling in your pulse
pierce me there... oh yeah right there
release your force
fallen angel
[Chorus]
agony exquisite... immolation
answering passions call
razor sharp.... fangs rising
embrace me... take it all
begging pain no repent
drenched in tainted satin
find that place consume me
take it deeper til im spent
rip me apart
crimson wings of flame
the angel falls fast
passions cast in thrust
my wild now tame
im all yours
burn me into ashen breath
throw me like a moth in fire
alone i fade away
a feather in the drift of Death
Burn me alive
----Repeat chorus
Author notes
Option #3 Love, Sex Dark - its all 3
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Comments
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great job!!
good luck!!
i have some songs of my own,
if you wanna read em message me for the names,
anyways best of luck,
Love,
Mouse -
wow.. this is really good.
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this is quite a song
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thanx!
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Thanks for entering my contest. This would make a good song. I enjoyed reading it. I wish you much luck.
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this is just amazing! i had fun reading it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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Oh my goodness
What a poem and wow such vision written into it good luck in the contest
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Wow
This is good. Kinda reminds me of a song by Aiden. Very well written and i liked it alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly
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