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Dedicated to someone

Mentally raped and torn to pieces
Left with noting to bare
To one day rise from the ashes
With patience the outsiders stare

For the sorrow one can't hold, too heavy to contain
With troubled words that hounds our worlds
Which houses the sanity we must maintain

The love, our burden, our passion, our pain
From our eyes brings the rain
The hate, the obsession,  the loss , the depression
Adds the weight  to the strain

Deny what's left and dwell upon the sorrows
Yet know each moment has a path that it follows

Steer clear from the fear that this will never end
One day just like today there is a moment to mend

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  • Little Miss Mental
    June 25, 2008

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    thank you!!! yes...it is true, the pain of today will someday come to an end...so thanx for entering, good luck