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stupid silly me

stupid silly me,
fell in love  with him,
when i said i did not...
stupid silly me,
knows nothing can ever happen,
because stupid silly me ruined everything,
and will continue doing as much in the end.
stupid silly me,
how i realize what i want when i lose it...
and stupid silly me,
to want more,
but will probably end it again.

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  • Lowell Poe
    July 9, 2008

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    Don't we all trip over our own feet all the time lassie?
    Then if we ever get what we want...we don't want it after all.
    Your piece is more profound then you will ever know.
    the things that shine and seem to be out of reach are the things we already possess,
    one person can never be every thing to us...people fool themselves and try to mold others.
    and when we cant change someone to our liking..we feel we did not manipulate them properly.
    I will tell you this lassie, your comments on my work are so valued now that i see your your poetic essence.
    I love silly...but no one is stupid when they try to find love..thats when we realize the only thing that is stupid is that trying probably makes us look silly....but when it works we could care less how it appears to others.
    Fucking love it gypsy.

    LOWELL POE


  • Pretty Britty
    June 25, 2008

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    Vwho the hell left you that comment?
    do you have ANOTHER online boytoy?
    jesus jumped up fiddling christ.

    • Merciful-Manner
      June 26, 2008
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      grrrrrr miss b meow

      • Pretty Britty
        June 26, 2008
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        don't you grr me >.>
        mr. i'm going to change my mind
        and then not tell britty
        so she feels kinda silly
        and forgets to delete the above comment

        >.>
  • Merciful-Manner
    June 25, 2008

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    I will try,so you may not give up.

    You know, I have always cared for you. I made a promise to you, and I will live up to it. I know things will all work out. Just got to see the Positive.

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