I came upon a daydreams shore
An ocean of golden dandelions sway in the breeze
The soft yellow smell of honeysuckle hard to ignore
For the senses...so many things to please
The elephants,lions,and clowns came out to play
A virtual circus in the ice blue sky
From whence they came or where they go I could not say
Lost in the ever changing clouds that pass by
Blades of grass grow the deep color of envy
And I've found some hearts do too
For no other place so perfect can be
More perfect than that which you hold within you
If only we all could learn to let out
The beauty we truly possess inside
Then my belief is that without a doubt
Our world would be one of insurmountable peace and love,
for ever and ever,until the day we died
A contest entry
- Dove Song by Shya.
600 points, ended September 21, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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brilliant write. Such a calming affect in your words. Thank you for entering
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...thank you
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I love this, it's so peaceful and TRUE!!
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This really is a beautiful poem and peace and hope... I just love these positive poems like this one, they are so full of grace and leave the reader with a happy feeling. Thanks for entering. Shya
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thank you for your great entry in my contest!
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Lovely!
A winsome piece poetry with nice rhyme and flow. I am more and more impressed as I read you.
Good luck in the contest!
Jennifer
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wow!!!!!
very good I really enjoyed reading this one
I could see it,smell it,touch it,taste it
very well written
good job&good luck
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Wow i could picture everything as i read. Its very cute and very well written. thanks for entering my contest. i wish you the best of luck
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this was a nice piece.. it flowed pretty well together. thanks for entering and good luck.
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