Dream Me Back

Scenes suspended
from muddled memories...

fragmented frames float
amid ocular anomolies.

Meet me here
where I hang in the realm
of lucid dreams.

Empty belltowers toll
while faceless figure
holds barren branches
bent with sorrow
at bay in bitter fields.

I wait for you...

to dream me back whole again.

Author notes

30-60 words on picture prompt by nailass

A contest entry

++Quickie++ by PerfectImperfection. 525 points, ended June 25, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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natchstucco
June 25, 2008

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I find this script very inspirational to read. great imagery and going is all directions. great job. well deserving of the goldie.

PerfectImperfection
June 25, 2008
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... YAY!

Solo Wisp
June 25, 2008

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Show-off ... This is total annihilation you've penned. no chance ... no hope for the rest of us!

hoodoolover
June 25, 2008
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LOL, believe me it's few and far between, thanks lol

Cerulean Sunrise
June 25, 2008

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Oh wow.
I see why this won gold.

Congrats.

PerfectImperfection
June 25, 2008

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Excellent take on the chosen prompt. Very well penned, nice imagery and detail. Thank you for your entry!

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