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Writers fancy

novel classic
story behind sad
happens frequent
in many a book

dark night
dotted with stars
ignite imagination
that sun light fails

dark horses
written about more
odds against
challenges the mind

writers find nothing
to scour in bright sun
things dead as certain evade,
soft vulnerable
amazes them

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  • righteousme
    June 29, 2008
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    great write... thanks again...


  • righteousme
    June 25, 2008
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    where did you pull your inspiration from?... i think this is a great piece... lovely execution...


  • maralisa silver member
    June 25, 2008

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    wonderful images painted within your words all writers try to ignite the imagination of the reader hoping that that there words will dance in amazement an great poem
    I enjoyed the following lines
    ignite imagination that sun light fails dark horses
    written about more odds against challenges the mind
    writers find nothing to scour in bright sun things dead as certain evade,soft vulnerable amazes them good luck in the contest


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    Well done, this is wonderful. I can totally relate to this. I loved the imagery here, great work and all the best in the contest.


  • Neha Sharma silver member
    June 25, 2008

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    Hi,
    This is a nice verse and I agree with the theme. but I guess that its not always only the dark emotion that bring out the poet in me. Am equally influenced by nature and happiness. So it all depends..person to person.
    Good Luck in the contest
    -Neha

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