We think of babies as fragile things
Needing our loving care
The truth is we are the weaker ones
Needing their love to share.
Of course they have to be pampered
Requiring our help to grow
But they give so much more than we
For our hearts, thanks to them, will glow.
A contest entry
- The Gift Of Life [picture prompt] by greyhaime.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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thanks for entering my contest,
lovely words here, but you didn't have the info in the authors notes that I wanted for the rules.
cheers
Grey
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excellent
Iliked the concepts that you are talking about.
wow you did an easy write with a difficult topic.
It cannot get any better.
You are definitly talented.
Pls visit some of my works.
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