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And so the lion fell in love with the lamb...

Twilight:
1. the soft, diffused light from the sky when the sun is below the horizon, either from daybreak to sunrise or, more commonly, from sunset to nightfall. 
2. the period in the morning or, more commonly, in the evening during which this light prevails. 
3. a terminal period, esp. after full development, success, etc.: the twilight of his life. 
4. a state of uncertainty, vagueness, or gloom.



Twilight.

Lost in my mind,
dancing with desire,
temptation,
lust.
The clouds
make it
look so
easy.

Twilight.

Where everything
is unclear
and mistaken
and you have
fallen
in
love.

Twilight.

One stands out
from all the rest
they just might be your
type.
Can you
resist?

Twilight.

Vague
in my description
of how
love used to be.
Is the light just
tricking
me?

Twilight.







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Twilight by Stephenie Meyer. Read it.

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  • tsarina
    August 26, 2008

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    this is so lovely! i love your wording, it's subtly passionate (i know, it's really sort of indescribable...)
    i also love the repetiton of "twilight"
    and also how you broke up the stanzas. it really gives the poem feeling.
    this is an awesome write!!! and i'm so glad how it's not one of those crummy "i love twilight. edward is hawt. bella is cool. jacob is dumb." (i get those a LOT.)

    keep writing!!
    tsarina ♥


  • StarIlluminated
    June 30, 2008
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    This is a really great poem! I like the flow and the vocab! Keep it up!
    *KT*


  • LuckyBlackCat
    June 28, 2008
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    oooooo you actually read it? yey! hope you liked it as much as i did....


  • Ifyoulovemekillme
    June 25, 2008

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    Great.

    I saw the title and was just like...
    I have to read this.
    Can't wait till Breaking Dawn and the movie.
    Anyway...great poem.
    I loved it


  • kira1115
    June 25, 2008

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    Awesome poem, awesome book series. Can't wait until August 2nd and December 12th! Keep writing and dreaming.

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