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Thoughts In a Tender Moment





Your corolla opens
from the kiss
of my love

I tumble into waterfalls of passion
In the pools of ecstasy I drown

All the while listening
to the songs
in your heart.

The songs that are in mine.





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  • ScarletO
    June 24
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    Sweet passion pulsates in each line. Simple and purely divine.


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    June 24
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    So now you have given me two, this is spoiling me but I like it so don't stop!

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    June 24

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    Don't drown I can swim but not very well, I'd need a lifejacket in deep water