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Everlasting

I suppose I'm just normal
Looking for love in here
I'm as normal as they come
Yet I am an exiting one
I suppose I'm different than others
And yet I would be an amazing lover
Perhaps I'm not the one for you
Reconsider please, because I wish you knew
How much I love you
Your beauty transcends time
If only we could have more time to be together
There is no one else who could treat you better
Than I
Maybe I'm just blowing smoke
If I was, by now I would have choked
I tell no lies
Every time I see you I wish you were mine
I'm the kind of guy that stays in a straight line
I would never stray from you
I would never cheat on you
I would never beat you
Yet I would always love you till the day that I die
Its every time you're in my sight
That I think of you every night
And sometimes I think that you might, might, love me back
If there is one thing that I lack
Its the ability to go off track
I stay in sight, never straying
Always staying
Your memory is ever passing
My love for you is ever lasting
I love you till the day I die...

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I LOVE YOU OZ

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  • movedon
    August 17, 2008

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    Aw, sorry you didnt win! But a great write! Oz is meh twin sissy!! I love the flow to this piece. Simplistic yet complicated with words of love. Great job!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Necropocalypse
    June 25, 2008
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    glad you like it


  • XBeautiful MistakeX
    June 25, 2008
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    awe this was soooo sweet. Ya really wrote this for me?? WOW!! im just...

     

    WOW!!!

    Oz

  • Necropocalypse
    June 24, 2008
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    hehe, thanks. it took me a while to find the right things to say


  • SilverWolf
    June 24, 2008

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    awww that is awesome!!! i really love this part:

    Than I
    Maybe I'm just blowing smoke
    If I was, by now I would have choked

    great job!!!!
    good luck in the contest!
    hope you win!!!

    SilverWolf

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