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The Curse?

Then came the curse
unbelieveable thoughts that prance
like clouds wondering in the night
I can't remember what to love
or who love me when when?
How to sleep in a cage covered
with fluttering birds?
too much happiness that have
saddened my soul
when I once could
sing light in sunshine
a voice that can only make
tears
and birds sing tears

dance the ears around me
loved by my heartbeat
but this heartbeat has
has lost its pace
because I have lost a tune

"What swinging gems that
hang, I once wished
had many pairs of these
my soul carried with her

then came the curse...!!!"


like a flute
that drinket the pond
that floats underneath
the moonlight

















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Option 4

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  • Anu-Nataraj
    November 28, 2008
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    thank u for ur entry
    good luck !


  • dewfall
    October 17, 2008
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    first

    i loved the last stanza, mind you there is a spelling error i think... "drinketh"? good read.


  • completely mad
    June 30, 2008
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    reminds me of the lady of Shelott ..this was a good piece