She speaks softly
as my heart races quickly
and my mind becomes dreamy
looking into the future I see
My heart runs away
Love within it cant stay
It follows her, where she goes
She'll feel loved I know
My Soul was clean
Looking at you glean
Reflecting mirror like, shadows
As my love became more apparent, to grow
A first glance
To be lost in trance
But not a First Love?
My love, loving you is tough
A contest entry
- Fall Me In Love. by Pretty Britty.
1400 points, ended June 29, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short but sweet -
I like this one,
I feel it has alot more depth than it at first lets on.
Well done!

