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My Love

She speaks softly
as my heart races quickly
and my mind becomes dreamy
looking into the future I see

My heart runs away
Love within it cant stay
It follows her, where she goes
She'll feel loved I know

My Soul was clean
Looking at you glean
Reflecting mirror like, shadows
As my love became more apparent, to grow

A first glance
To be lost in trance
But not a First Love?
My love, loving you is tough

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  • Pretty Britty
    June 25, 2008

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    Short but sweet -
    I like this one,
    I feel it has alot more depth than it at first lets on.
    Well done!