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Rinse Cycle







Tears flow through green leaves;
soot, wasted resources, washed
into a new day.






©2008 rous
6-23-08





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Elrénia
Written for the contest: Haiku Contest ---for Visions through Haiku Members only.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2411049

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 25

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    Tears flow through green leaves;
    soot, wasted resourses, washed
    into a new day.

    This is such a refreshing Haiku. It brings up pleasant views of washed leaves.
    I think you mean 'resources' instead of 'resourses'.
    This is a lovely write.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


    • Elrenia
      June 25
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      Yes, indeed, it is misspelled. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. I do appreciate your applauds and kind words. Well wishes with your contest.