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I should be on TV

I should be on TV

The tragic girl
With a perfect life

A broken heart
But never broke

Always depressed
But never lonely

Always lying
But never lied to

Always taking
What I don't deserve

And all I can think now is
That wow...

I should be on TV

A contest entry

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  • SEA angel gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    Thank you

    For being a part of cast to star in this contest. If you feel you should be on TV and fit the part then I hope that powers that be agree. Looks like you are leading actress in this contest so far leading the way that others may follow.


  • Peripatetic gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Hey, I think I've seen that show!

    Excellent social commentary. How well television characters and families live, often with no jobs, entry level jobs, or free lance careers! Your satire is right on the money about the silliness of the characters and plots. Unfortunately, people who work like the folks on TV discover they cannot live like those people do. Art and life may imitate each other, but they do not seem to duplicate each other very well!