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i'll push you away
hoping you don't see
what's wrong with you
is that you're with me
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i've givin you hell
and denied you a place
locked you out my heart
without a trace
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because i know
if you hate me now
you'll leave and
you'll never see how...
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just how much i've
never done for you
never gave you a chance
and you always knew
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but i won't make you suffer
through my arrogance
so move, keep going
don't give a second glance
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leave, walk away
go so you can be free
and please,
(don't) hate me
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Author notes
Blue October-Hate Me
This is just a contest poem inspired by the above song, hope you like.
A contest entry
- 25 Songs by A Lonely Soul.
1750 points, ended July 8, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~i am nothing yet i still am~
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this must be one of ur older poems i wented to return the favor and here i amm lol and way its great as all way nice work sis k later women MMMWWWHHHHAAAA!!!
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;laughs; Well, it's not old, its just for a contest and the song fit the way I used to write so I wrote that way. Thanks for the comment. MWhA back to you.
jan
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This was awesome, I really liked it. You did a great job writing it. There was one error in it, just a spelling one. you have 'noever' when I think you meant 'never' keep up the great writes.
~~Tori~~
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;giggles; Must feel good to get to fix my mistakes.
Thanks for the comment, have fun judging the contest.
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lol it's been awhile since I caught a mistake from you. I couldn't resist and just had to point it out
Luvz ya!
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