She strangled within norms
adjusting weaves and patterns
to fit majorities -
compromising comfort
for conformity
where suitings don't mix
and mismatched catastrophes
resembled her face.
Author notes
Entry for: Project Poetry - Round 6
Artist Chosen: Rami Kashou
Picture #7
Explanation:
With this picture, I felt that the dress didn't suit the model at all. She even looked pale [sad] and compromised - so I penned this.
Now you tell me:
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This made me smile.
Just the thought of society and pathetic people.
But - saying that, you write beautifully.
Devices and dimensions are spot on.
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I think that recently, I'm obsessed with using "face" for insulting. lol
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Touched me
I love how you were able to trap into words the struggle that some of us face when confronted with situations that force us to compromise ourselves, adjusting ourselves to 'fit majorities.' Wow
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Goog-Write"""
A Very Un-Distorted Poem, Enjoyed It Much..Good Luck, In The Contest, too....Short, sweet, and to the Point!!! "God Bless'...LOve, Shirley ann shaw.....
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