I went in to use the restroom
and felt a sudden blast,
it shook me up really bad,
It made me jump up fast.
I felt it in the restroom
as I was using the john,
I didn't know what to do
or what was going on.
I wasn't quite finished
when the blast occured,
I hurried as fast as I could
and I didn't say a word.
Luckily I was sitting down
or I would have made a mess,
after the blast happened
all I could do was guess.
I wondered what had caused
such a disturbance to occur,
I left the restroom stunned,
in my mind I wasn't sure.
It must have been a prank
since nobody else was seen,
at the time it happened
I thought that it was mean.
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- After The Blast by Topaze.
1000 points, ended June 27, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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wow! that must have hurt, thanks for the laugh it was great! I like the change in option. The world is wrapped up in 911. What did we do to Japan, what is a terrorist? did we ask for it? what is a crime against mankind? who comited it? Thank you for your light hearted approach it was a nice change of pace. I never saw such a population wrapped up in themselves believing they are the only ones hurt!
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