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Insecurities

Question
              never ending question
Always looking down


Eyes,
        Nose,
Mouth,

                        All wrong

Face hidden
Walk is silent

Voice does not exist


Am I invisible yet?

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  • Hell In Harmony
    June 24, 2008

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    I liked this.
    I liked the choppiness
    and fast-pace and simplicity
    It really added a better punch
    THANK you! Kat