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Underneath the midnight sky

You hold me in your arms
Underneath the midnight sky
This feels so right
I dont want this moment to die
Underneath the midnight sky
I breath in the smell of your cologne
as you hold me tight
Underneath the midnight sky
You walk me home
Your hand in mine
You kiss me goodbye
Underneath the night sky

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  • i.bite.voodoo.dolls
    July 19
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    oooo

    i LOVE this !
    the nights so beeeeautiful
    <3


  • angel of the dead
    February 5

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    wow

    gurly you are deep i like this one it is really cool
    love you


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    I like the way you write, it's (no offence) a little amature in a way, but strong and beautiful as any poem... well done keep it up, dont you love love?

  • DarkFairy
    July 9, 2008
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    i dont reaally get this either

  • DarkFairy
    July 9, 2008
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    hey cuz!!
    i love this and my bf thanks

  • DarkFairy
    July 4, 2008
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    this is so amazing jackie i luv it


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    hey baby gurl =] this is a beautiful write and the emotion within it is also powerful. im sorry we have not spoken a lot. love you baby gurl

    your ap mom
    xxx


  • ChunkyC
    June 24, 2008
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    Beautiful Jackie.
    I love it.
    Truly. :]

    Good Job. :]


  • Simply Simple
    June 24, 2008

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    How beautiful. I loved the repetition. I felt almost like this could've been longer. A mock epic if you will. Either way. It's great as is! Excellent work my friend.

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