Loneliness try to grab
Others want to ignore
I already got hurt
Don't need love anymore
I look for a friend
Look for an angel
But the world has changed
Even friendship became fake
No i wont cry anymore
I'll never give them
A chance to ignore
I have decided to leave this place
I will fly away toward darkness
Only there i would have my own space
How is this poem?Do you like it?
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hi my name is Anna and I think that this poem is really good keep up the good work
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You said it all in this write, the world has changed so much. It's hard enough to keep family let alone try to keep a friend or find true love. Awesome Write!!
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Soul we all get sad and lonely, i am sorry you feel bad...I wish you happiness and joy. Sweetie give me a smile...
I do apoligize for not reading you as i should have been.
Went through a rough time myself lately.
So big hugsss
~Lisa~
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You are still a sad soul, aren't you Soul? I like this piece very much. It has so much to say about how you feel as all your poems speak. You truly possess a beautiful heart and your life shines through your words. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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Love is the answer to every question.
R u sure? May be darkness also ignore you, then what?
What is love..:" baby dont hurt me, baby dont hurt me!!"
Love is a sword to the heart, an arrow half inside and half outside, it gives pain forever and we enjoy this pain as its love's gift.
Friends, lovers, strangers, name them with any identitiy, the fact remains the same.
The thirst remains there
and you will live on green from outside but dead n rotten to the core with that secret pain ever gnawing at the heart..
no man you cannot runaway from love, only the one who never loved, can!!
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Ditto... Never give up you are LOVED
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Hey brother, this is so sad. Very well done! Great job with the rhyming. Remember tho, I am here for you. I have not left you. I will never leave you. I will always be here for you. I love you brother and please dont isolate yourself
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Who does not look for someone like that,Being lonely hurts so badly.
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why all this ar so much like what i like ??? it's lovely
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Sweetness is this.
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a good poem, though i thought it a little jaggerdy. i am not even sure if that is a real word but i am sure you know what i mean. it just did not flow for me when i was reding it. sorry if that sounds harsh, i do not mean to be harsh.
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This is heartbreaking! I understand how you feel, and can relate real well to this one! But right now, I am heading for a life that dreams are made of, and am happy with it. I hope one day you can find such love and happiness. Hang in there my brother, it will come.
and love
Nyetta
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heart-breaking...sometimes the heart....needs and longs for a quiet
place...to rest..and breathe...new energy and life...
the shedding process
is never a comfortable one!
ears/Seattle
your hopeful new AP GRANNY!
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i am starting to see that you really are a lonely boy
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I immediately feel your pain in this piece which shows you have an excellent way of conveying emotion through your writing. I feel for you, however and urge you to not cut yourself off from future relationships, be it intimate or friendly terms. Our purpose here is to love one another, that is the ultimate gift and the way to enlightenment and bliss. You do not belong in the dark and should not lead yourself to it. Smile, you are a beautiful soul. Even in your darkness, I still see your light.
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sorry i forgot to put this in too!
I am your friend too!!!!!!!
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NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! DONT ISOLATE YOUR SELF!! YOUR GIVING IN TO THE LONLINESS!! FIGHT BUDDY! FIGHT WITH ALL YOUR MIGHT! (like a tiger..) Lol!
great poem, It's true, but there are real friends out there you just have to search really hard.
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your own space..with the memories of life..that space would not be empty again..though your immagery and effert here is wonderful to bring your own point of view my friend..well done.,...
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Man what a great dark poem it it, i wish you will not rly away from us and stay with us with happiness.
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i really like this.
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Honest sharing of a broken heart. Many of us fight this feeling everyday. Some seem to have many friends and be on top...yet most times they are lonely inside as well. I can relate to this write and to this feeling of wanting to escape...have fought it for 47 years now...still fighting.
Blessings my friend!
Az
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Loneliness is a terrible feeling that most people will experience at some point in life but there are two great allies which allow people passage to a better place. The first ally is positive thinking which allows us to face today head on rather than hiding from the past. The second ally is time which should be used well to put into practice the things we learned from past mistakes. In doing this, the past will fade, today will help heal, the future will become brighter and there will be no need to fly away to dark places.
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Fly away into the night *sings*
Thanks dude
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Man it sdamn sure that we are friends
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No please no, dont write like this, please i am sure there are many people who wanna be your friend..you will find someone, who really deserve you
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this is kinda depressing. But i dont think you should do it. you need to open yourself to people in your own country and stuff
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aww what a sad write my friend..keep faith..you will find right person in right time..great job with this
Ruby
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I feel sadness from this write
I felt someone who feels lonely and yet at times he tried to be friends or lover nothing worked out .Only what he doesnt know is that if we all felt this way no one would have friends and no one would be in love .Its a process of learning the pain and the joys we all have felt and learned and when the right ones come along if we never try we shall never knw the true people in the world thus left alone unsure . Never stop trying but dont treat new friends as though they are going to ditch on you like the others for new friends will sense your uneasiness and leave without ever knowing why
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