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Mind Tease

Excite me
with the spirit of your mind.
Titillate me
with your brilliant sense of rhyme.
Torture me
with the silliness of your soul.
Take me
with your sensual heart glow.

Use your intellectual foresight
to portend the strokes, kisses, and caresses.
Come to me with a deep desire to entice me
with more than bodily pleasure.
Tell me a story and arouse my brain
in the spot where the imagination
breaks free to illuminate
the pathways to heaven.

See,

your mind is a channel for the senses to explode.

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  • ckwriter69
    June 24, 2008

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    Nice write, very sensual and yes we all need to arouse our brains. Thanks for sharing your poem and good luck in the contest.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 24, 2008
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    very nice hon i think you openen a few blind in the poetry house let the breeze flow in good luck to you dear poet

    Lady Jazz


  • darell
    June 24, 2008

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    Nice!

    an exciting write that tugs and teases
    the imagination with sensual vibrations of passion.
    You words were enticing and your visual delightful

    Mmmm! Very nice job!