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Seven is a Magic Number

A glare, blood stops in the veins,
one

A smirk, I laugh at you,
two

A shove, your touch disgusts me,
three

A smile, I love another,
four

A glass of wine, is it poisoned?
five

Left in the dark, not knowing pain's reasons
six

A sharp kick out of the house,
seven

because a true lover would have never survived past two.

Author notes

This didn't turn out how I thought it would, I had real trouble with the ending so i had to change the whole poem around so that it would work somewhat. Anyways, I hope you like it.

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  • i like it that is funny and im sure that is a good thing lol

  • Darkwell silver member
    June 24

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    i like 4 best cuz that kills ego

    i like it alot an his countdown to being kicked out

    WTG!!!