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Poetry in its finest

2day, I met poetry at its finest,
in the form of a beautiful, black, christian woman
worthy 2 be called your highness.
First I read her words,
then she spoke to me.
But this poetry, this poem,
she was written already.....
for someone else and it wasnt me.
Composed in perfection was this body of poetry,
in every stanza from top 2 bottom, beginning to end.
Not too short and not too long.
Her hair written in lines smoother than silk,
her face written flawlessly,
and if I could write the beauty of her eyes
I would have 2 plageurize (did I spell dat rite?)
but the age to come would say that this poet lies
cause only God is worthy to write such beautiful lines
So see, she was copyrighted.
There will never be another poem like her,
so deep, so spiritual, classy, strong, Beautiful,
sophisticated but simple,
I dont have 2 read between her lines,
and never would I edit, add or subtract from this work of art,
for Im so in love with the way she is written.
Have you ever been lost within the eyes of poetry
while playin the piano to the lyric of her melody?
(Smile)
I have

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  • ShaShay
    June 24, 2008
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    Very Well Done

    Your word choices fit the title and content and flowed easily. I really enjoyed this one. Pen on...


  • DD Sai
    June 24, 2008
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    Smooth

    The words roll of your tongue like water. Great job.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    wow! and this is what i cal what i do neo soul poetry this piece definately should be labeled in that category it has all the stamina the fixing and the qualification to be in that area i never well i rarely read a poem that can have a great jump start and a delicious ending i loved this adding this to my list this was all my pleasure to read