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Mirror..Mirror

Missing image

The face that appears in my mirror

is not someone I know

this girl she is broken

hidden in the dark shadows

bruised and bewildered

who is she?

what does she want?

She cries helplessly

I can feel her pain

I can see her reaching for a hand

someone to hold her tight

Only one thought on her mind

S.u.i.c.i.d.e

It's her only chance

she can get away

she can get out

With each slice

of that rusty blade

her pain will be released

She's so tired...

She is so weak...

 

this girl...

  this girl is...

         Me
 

 

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  • cartier
    August 19
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    damn girl i like how you write. a lot.

  • DarkRomantic113 silver member
    August 18
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    I hope you write instead of cut now.

  • broken-angel
    July 10
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    amazing write xx

  • mrs. random silver member
    June 25

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    *hugs you close*

    Such a sad write my sister. But, you are loved and you have far to go in this life. Chloe needs you. And you are a beautiful girl; never forget that okay?
    I'm praying for you sweetie!!!

    Mylee

  • -Gabriel
    June 24

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    Although this may be the inappropriate thing, I think this poem is amazing. I love the irony of the font color you chose.

  • killshort
    June 24

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    Please don't melyssa...you need not resort to doing that...you know you have me here with you if you need someone...it makes me sad when you write these poems, I can't lose the only person i trust to tell everything too, the only person I can say I will be part of your life no matter what it takes in anyway i fit in it. Your better then that. I know You have the will power in you deep inside you to make it thru any hardships...no matter how hard it is you know i am always here for you and i believe in you and i know you can overcome those hardships...

    This is an amazing write melyssa, your letting all your pain out in this poem and it makes me wanna run all the way to your house and just give you a big hug and make sure you will be ok

    Joe

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