rolling
thunder under
billowy clouds of white,
sky azure blue, heavenly sight.
journey
side by side following our dreams,
both seeking the beauty
riding beneath
sunbeams.
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mountains
high, prairie sprawl,
such grandeur to travel,
so sweetly we hear Ozarks call.
shine down
in awe resplendent summer sun.
wondrous new beginning,
ride together
as one.
Author notes
Butterfly Cinquain, 2 4 6 8 2 8 6 4 2
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXI by Arkbear.
500 points, ended June 30, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely formed butterfly cinquains, very descriptive and beautifully formed thanks for sharing your talents and congrats on the gold.
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Hi Sweet Sandy :)
There is nothing to critque here ~
Gorgeous Presentation.....flawless aesthetics....beautiful Theme........wonderful Flow ~
....and Perfect count!
Thank you so much for coming out and taking the time to show off your talents my Friend!
Good luck and God bless you!
Brother Bear ~
wondrous new beginning,
ride together
as one.
*sigh*
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Beautiful Butterfly Cinquain! I love motorcycles and hope to own one someday.
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Great Comment
Hello there Rob, Well I hope you get that motorcycle someday. Thank you for the nice comment my dear friend. You take care. Hugs and Smiles.
Blessings For You,
Sandy
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What a beautiful form, so soft and delicate and visually gorgeous.
Your words are, as always, magnificent as I feel the rolling thunder pass me by admiring the ride
Wonderful write!
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Lovely Comment!!!
Good Morning Amanda. Thank you for the wonderful comment. This was a fun poem to write for Arkbear. Thank you for stopping by and reading.
Bless You,
Sandy
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freedom rides...
A great take on the picture prompt Sandy.Your words painted a wonderful picture of enjoying a country ride on the back of a bike with the wind blowing in the hair as one rides the bike of freedom.Brings back a lot of memories of when my hubby had his bike and we went cruising along the highway enjoying the scenery, feeling free as a bird as we rode along...Ahhh yes...such beautiful memories.You have been a real pleasure to read.
Thanks Sandy for sharing such beauty with us and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Blessings to you,
~Angel~
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Thank You
Good Morning, Thank you for reading my poem and leaving this lovely comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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oh my!
this is lovely!
such a delight to read!
best of luck it the contest!!
i LOVED:"in awe resplendent summer sun.
wondrous new beginning, ">> beautifully woven lines
~s.p.
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Good Morning
Hello, Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I appreciate your lovely comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Very beautiful poem good luck
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Great Comment
Good Morning, Thank you so much for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your very nice comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Nice.
Very nice write, Sandy. You're getting better & better at rhyming. Fine work.
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Good Morning My Friend!!!
Hello Jaime, Thank you for reading my poem. Always nice to see you pop in and read.
You take care. Have a wonderful day!!!
Bless You,
Sandy
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