When light turns to dark
ill be there
in your window in your door
in your room when you sleep
I hear your blood pumping though your vines
I smell your fear
It sends shivers down my spine and make me want you more
I call to you softly my child
Your soul is mine
you come to me
i stroke my hand across your cheek
Then I go down your bair chest
You shall not live to see another day or night
i grab you and sink my teeth in to you
You let out a scream
I pull you closer
I feel your heart beat slowing
Your body gets weaker
after a while you die
I though you on the bed like you were nothing
cause you are
I let out a laugh as u leave your room
Then I see a nother man going into his room
he smiles at me
and i wink at him he opens his door then stands to the side
well i never turn down desert
hahaha
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A contest entry
- Vampires. Slayers, Werewolfs, Zombies,Options, Pre-writes by mystic-angel.
600 points, ended August 14, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
do you like it?? its not my best vampire poem but its ok
Comments
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Awesome i loved the ending more than the start of it. Great job. ..<3.. Shelly
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I like this It makes the imagination run wild. Thanks for entering, good luck!
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Awesome! A spell check would definately add to the mood... but wow, it's been a while since I read such a fine vampy poem. The least best, you say? I shall have to view more!!
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That's really creepy sis, and really great, nice work.
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a nice write, im sure in some vampires mind this may be what they're thinking, nice work and keep the pen flowing you've realy got some talent
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thanks
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