Your coldest touch is better than the hole left in your absence,
though I know my presence has only caused more confusion
and destruction when the goal was your joy.
I sank into oblivion and lost the way to the sun,
where I left anything I could bring to you for happiness.
I will miss you always,
but shall rest better as long as i know you found yourself.
Perhaps one day you will forgive me,
but for now, forget,
because nothing is permanent.
A contest entry
- Happiness is only temporary by BellaD.
950 points, ended July 6, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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This was very powerful. Great Write! Keep it up!
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Very well written and thought-provoking. The first line really grabbed me. Great job on this.
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a very nice write, i realy enjoyed reading this pice, i hope you do well in the contest and wish you the best of luck you realy have some great talent here
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