Open
The door of life
Take your bike and your wife
Do not let anything stop you
Highway
Travel across the open road
a new place to call home
the mountains pass
beauty
Blue sky
Meets the dark road
In the forest of trees
The horizon is left behind
Across
The open road I will travel
The dirt and the gravel
Motorcycle
Riding
Author notes
insipred by the picture found at http://allpoetry.com/contest/2411207
butterfly cinquain
my first shot
Syllable count:
2
4
6
8
2
8
6
4
2
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXI by Arkbear.
500 points, ended June 30, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Done so well! even for a first time. Thank you so much for entering my contest!
All the best!
Becks -
I really enjoyed this poem. I felt like I was going cross country on the back of a motorcycle seeing the sites. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Well.....with the exception of Wife...I like this entry :)
My Partner is a Guy...hehe ~
1st stanza....*Travel across the open road................2nd stanza......The open road I will travel*
Both penned in different Form........I always like to go forward in thought....not backwards :)
.....and yes, there is lots of dirt & gravel to play on with our bikes ~
Nice entry and great Form with aesthetics ~
Perfect count as well.....thank you so much for entering ~
God bless you!
Bear ~
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Excellent
Wow i like this alot its very well written and worded great. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck!
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nice!
love this!
you've done well for your first try
best of luck in the contest!!
~s.p.
**but I think you meant "riding"....not "ridding"...i dont think you are trying to get rid of anything lol
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Excellent poem good luck in the contest
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