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Took the Cooper bus.
Out of downtown Miami.
Where all the drunk and homeless live.
The bus stopped at a screaching halt.
Making all the reckless fall to their fault.
I wondered why what was going through my mind.
When I set foot on the hell mobile.

Every pair of eyes bore to my side.
Taking my seat on the bus collide.
The doors slammed shut.
My gut told me I was in a rut.
But kept to myself when the wheels started turning.

Music started playing.
People started saying
"Who's that girl sitting over there?"

The talk of change and the angst rage.
Were echoing throughout the newspaper page.

I wrote this real fast, it's all over the place, and it's not done. What do you think about it so far?

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  • WhoWroteHoldenCL
    June 25, 2008
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    =[ I don't want you to be mad.

  • WhoWroteHoldenCL
    June 24, 2008
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    Okay, Kayla...you're not supposed to get every single little piece of lyrics you read. I bet if you looked at other band's lyrics, you wouldn't understand some of them.

    • Praeter Lacuna
      June 25, 2008
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      I KNOW that. I'm just making specific comments. Duhh. I didn't say it was a BAD thing, I just said I didn't get it. Yeesh. Don't comment my comments.

  • Praeter Lacuna
    June 24, 2008

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    Um "stepped foot"... the phrase is "set foot." Unless you want it that way, of course. "But IIII" You forgot the I. Lol. What kept to myself? I kept to myself. XD. I don't get the line "Taking my seat on the bus collide." But I like the rest.