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Lose Myself

The love that I gave you
Pouring from my soul, my everything
I still wish that I could have you
But I am so alone

You are my only one
And what I want doesn't matter
I'll do this all for you
Because you are all I am

I would die just to be with you
One more time, just once
For you, I fly
Past the time and against everything

Just to be with you
I would do anything, I will do everything
You are all I am
And I will find you soon

I'll let you go
Because it is the best that I can do
For you, my all and all
And I will lose myself

Because if you are happy
I am too, though I do not exist
Now without you, I find happiness
In the truth that you are well

In you I found myself
But I'll give it all back to you
What I've found, and what I am
For you

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  • aanika
    June 25, 2008

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    i like what i found behind the words.
    however, the words themselves could use some work.
    this is pretty repetitive and although i love the idea,
    i think you could express yourself with more imagery.
    also, adding some punctuation couldn't hurt.

    however, this is one of the only entries that i've found actually is composed by your feelings. i love that.


  • XxWillow LeafxX
    June 24, 2008

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    i like it..

    I have a question after reading this...are you in love?? this is very connected with another person and when I have a rush of emotion, I am compelled to write about it. I think that the feelings behind the poem make it stronger, it truely is a good poem.