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Mind vs Heart

You would step close to me,
and my heart would skip a beat,
Even though it still does today,
my mind is against it,
but my heart just won't obey.

You led me on to believe,
but you only did deceive,
deceiving me has got me here,
crying, knowing that I shouldn't,
shouldn't shed a single tear.

Here is like no where,
& my hearts to damaged to repair.
This is all thanks to you,
I trusted you and believed,
but who knew what you would do?

I know what you're planning,
but I still find you enchanting.
My feelings rule over all my sense,
my mind knows that you're not worth it,
but my heart beats on at it's expense.

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  • funckymonkey
    July 1, 2008
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    i love your poem
    i especially like the first verse!!


  • Shiny 4 Eva
    June 26, 2008

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    WOWOWOW

    hmm...
    very interesting...
    anyway
    very deep,
    i'm not a poetic
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      July 3, 2008
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