Fallen angels
meteor past
in their endless display
through moonlit skies
echoing frustration
in desparate cries
It is the season
of falling stars.
The shower of the forgotten
blinks into existence
and streak above
speaking of anger
sometimes in love
Their trails are brightly lit
in their magnificent journey
of dares
that ascends and descends through
heaven's luminous stairs
The light from yonder satellite
shines pathways into the starlit nite
as Luna screams
from out of her dark
The moon is full
and bright
at the goodbye of midnight
Author notes
Option #1 AFI-Death of seasons
A contest entry
- If you write, write for here ^_^ by luna-midnight.
900 points, ended June 26, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
Comments
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Congrats on the HM!
Wow stunning imagery within your words. A superb poem, flow and rhyme are spot on IMO. A pure delight to read. Congrats on the HM
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*sigh* you need to read the rules, andfollow the rules, you are to place the prompt and credit the author ofthe prompt in your author's notes, if you do not do so, i will have to DQ you, sorry but rules are rules, and this is a warning.
now to the poem.
this was a lovely poem, and i enjoyed reading it, thanks so much for entering, and i hope you enjoyed writting
take care, and good luck
stephanie -
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Sorry!
I'm a feeble old man who has alzheimer's. I tend to forget the simple things. I have corrected and placed the prompt and author. Take care, Luna
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