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Waste Disposal

Passionately tender
nights,
whispered love
words…

Every moment a lie…

Happiness gone…

consumed by
the garbage disposal
of your heart…

flushed by my tears…



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Prompt: Garbage
Picture Credit: http://negativegs.deviantart.com/art/I-Love-You-Not-15375302
24 words

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  • jcat gold member
    June 24, 2008
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    HA! This was brilliant!! I love where you took this..Very poetically done!!! Best wishes....