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Sleep

As the cold blue sky turns in tonight

I am simply terrified

As my simple exotic thoughts turn into dreams

My small head awakens

From the night

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  • patsoldcat
    June 26, 2008
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    final read

    this was a nice write but you did not use all the words.
    sorry but i must disqualify this work.