The endings tide near
For there ought to be
Just a simple gesture
A mere motion or two
A subtle hello
Versus a long goodbye
A voiceless face
Than a faceless voice
A few sweet words
Than harsh paragraphs
A short stay
More than never there
I give these to you
And never take it away
For what time we have
Shall never not be time
Author notes
The poem was a lot longer than it is now. But that would have been contradictory to the message within the poem, wouldn't it? Actually, I just thought the elongated version was too drawn out and desperate for a read. This way it's simpler. Hope you enjoy!
A contest entry
- Fall Me In Love. by Pretty Britty.
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wowe!
tho it was short, i think it was brillaint! a lovely write... made me smile! >.< keep penning kays!
AWESOME!
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