Boy you got me so damn horny that Im drenching my panties
You arent even touching me yet and Im ready to cum
Hand barely grazing this soft skin, lips close to my ear telling me all the naughty things youll do
Im gripping the sheets with my feet, biting my lip as I await this sexual fate
Your hand comes in full contact with my skin, I let off a sigh of relief
It touches my every curve...my body becomes butter in your hands
Caressing my breasts, you look up at me with those sexy bedroom eyes
Your toungue hot and wet up and down this deserving body
Youve been teasing me for oh so long
Slowly sliding a finger inside me to see how bad I want you
"Come on! give it to me now!"
Your body over top of mine, the tip of your dick tracing my pussy
"I cant take it anymore!"
Now youre on your back...Im straddling you
Without hesitation I take that whole dick deep inside me
The reaction on your face is priceless as I grind my body
I cum and it covers your dick like a thick, tasty blanket and continues to drip down
That alone drove you crazy and with one final moan you bust your hot, sticky load
"Ahh, satisfaction"
A contest entry
- Wanting An AP Family by Ms Sexy.
600 points, ended June 29, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn Me On by NeverSayAddiction.
725 points, ended July 10, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mmmmmm.... SEXY by Still single.
500 points, ended July 17, 2008, 30 entries
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775 points, ended August 22, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
umm ya lol ;)
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haha
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Now that my dear was HOT!!! Very good job. Did I mention that it was hot?! Thanks for the entry
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hehe thank you,
glad u liked!
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I like this real hot!!!!
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thnks!
hope it made u really hot too babe
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Hot stuff, thanks for entering the contest.
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thank you
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Very hot!!! I really enjoyed this!!!
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thanks! glad u liked
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I'll give it to you anytime..lol. Very nice write..
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yay thanks
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Baby, you're goin to be my niece. I love the fact that you write erotica but i just realized your age. You are a good damn writer to be so young. Thanks ffor entering baby
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yay! lol ya its a shock to most ppl and thanks so much.
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you got down on this ma you really did a great job i enjoyed this a whole lot take care
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hehe i try. thanks hun
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Wow!! cold shower in my near future. Care to join? What you got here is raw and upfront which I love in erotic poems.
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hehe fuck yes i do! haha thanks babe
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Sweet! (Takes clothes off, warms the water, lathers you up and start by makin out with the water hitting you in the right spot)
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oh my lol ur nawty i love it! hehe
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Hot
I know what kind of mood you were in haha. Very raw an unadulterated. Not too much worried about language and structure and what not, but bluntly says how it is; sometimes thats EXACTLY what is needed! I like this a lot!
"Your body over top of mine, the tip of your dick tracing my pussy
"I cant take it anymore!"
Now youre on your back...Im straddling you
Without hesitation I take that whole dick deep inside me"
I can picture this happening...hot just thinking about it. I don't know what your purpose was
but I can say...ahem...it WORKED lol. 7.5/10!
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haha! hell yes...lol thanks so much..glad u liked it
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crissy you are a trip with your cute lil self i love this the fire the energy and everything it is a nice poem i think you did a fab job
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hehe thank you! aww u think im cute?
yay
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So many beautiful and saucy things just in one erotica....such as...
You getting horny
drenching your panties
touching
you almost ready to cum
hands grazing the soft skin
lips close to your ear telling you all the naughty things you will be done to you
you gripping the sheets with pretty feet
biting your lips as you await this sexual fate
a hand coming in full contact with your skin
touching your every curve
your body becoming butter in your lover's hands
caressing your lovely-shaped breasts
looking up at you with sexy bedroom eyes
the hot tongue moving up and down your deserving body
teasing you
your lover sliding a finger inside you to see how bad you want you
your lover's body on top of mine
you straddling your lover
the priceless reaction on the lover's face as you lustfully grind your hot pussy
your cum covering your lover's dick like a thick, tasty blanket...continuing to drip down
botth of you moaning out of ecstasy
and getting complete satisfaction...
I couldn't remain sexually inactive after watching you involed in such a beautiful game of pleasure
So I had to masturbate thinking of my sweet kitten
...And now let me have a shower...
Like to join me, cutie!
Kisses...all over, honey!
Galaxy2
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OMG! lol id love to shower and fuck with you haha
its my pleasure to pleasure u babe! xoxo
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Hehe these are your best type of writes I think *winks* good luck in the contest babe :-) xox
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oh really? thanks! love u
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oh great im horny now lol ^.^
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lol so am i thanks
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um.....um.....um...... i hope im the lucky guy!
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lol maybe
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I need a ice cold shower..this is very hot.
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can i join? jk lol thanks
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Ermmmm.......:S Blush much, lol, this is something to, well, warm you up, lol, love it!
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lol!!!! yay
thanks babe
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:)
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lol ty
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Ahhh satifaction
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lol
im glad u liked hun
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