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Greeting The Gala

Melodies whip gently
wrapping my gown
The woodpecker pecks
as I traipse around

A quartet of chipmunks
a band of swallows
floating music on the air
deep in the march, follows

Giggles clearly are the sport
in a parade of petite wiles
As leaves like magic carpets
are ridden to anxious smiles

There on that ancient oak stump
a buffet to fill your homemade horn
Mulberry wine and honey cakes
blackberries and acorns

Roses, jasmine and orange blossom
are this day’s exotic perfume
Iridescent wings shower dust
upon a festival in full bloom

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  • scarlet screams
    June 26, 2008

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    Ah, the Fey. You really captured their playful and colourful nature. I could really see this going further. Thank you for your entry, and best of luck!


  • individuality gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    a good poem, i like the smiles i find here though i thought it was for dark fantasy? that aside, whatever the contest is asking for i think this is good. ah i look at the contest now, it is a different contest to what i was think so that's why