A single smile
brushes in a zephyr breath,
ever change, inexplicably uncontrollable,
the satiated pause to clouds
over the mind's sky.
Never more than precious hug to the heart,
but bringing its glow,
which etches an irrevocable image,
pure and potent,
shuddering to the core
with an essence of ecstasy's opiate.
Whispers rise in the wonder,
this taste of paradise
fluttering in winged elation,
so riveting in its power,
yet a phantom, translucent and fleeting,
who visits by an appointment
that is not declared.
We can't explain all that it is
nor define how to make the euphoric magic last,
just welcome it as the host of joy's incense
savored and cherished
until the next blessing
brings another curl to the lips.
Author notes
Prompt: Happiness
A contest entry
- Happiness is only temporary by BellaD.
950 points, ended July 6, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful poem. Great description of and thoughts about smiles. Very nice. Thank you for the entry.
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Wahoooooooo~
Sure sounds like Happiness to me

Another one to Love and Excellent take on the prompt~
-runs around Happy-
Whispers rise in the wonder,
this taste of paradise
fluttering in winged elation,
so riveting in its power,
These lines grab and keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
Best wishes too
and my Love & Light
~ Desire~*~


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Very evocative write concerning the indelibility of a smile. I enjoyed the read. Happy trails



