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Translucence

 

 

A fog on glass
translucent skin
presses the surface
cooling the flesh
as droplets cascade
the subtle curves.
Tumescent shapes
emerge in the shiver
as steam whirls away
in a breathless twirl.
Long shadowy forms
appear and withdraw,
a rhythm in the mist
as clouds gather - disperse
in quickening gasps,
the liquid echoes, moans
reaching, reaching and then
finally a release
the dampness suddenly calm.
Fingertips slide
down shower doors
with a whispered, "Yes."

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Saffron gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    This is a really nice sensual take on the contest prompt--I very much like this one, and the soft and sexy overtones of the poem. Thank you so much for writing this for the contest--I am very glad to see it here.

    Saffron


  • PrincessOfDecent
    June 24, 2008
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    REALLY good, I give it five thumbs up! lol