night stars-
a welcome mat
to heaven’s… door
My Haiku/Senryu Poetry
Author notes
Picture Inspiration,
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2410/763.jpg?1214325507
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku III by Kelli Marie.
2250 points, ended June 27, 2008, 33 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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God write congratulations on the Silve.
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Nicely punctuated and concise. Congrats.
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oh my!
I LOVE this!!!!
"night stars-
a welcome mat
to heaven’s… door">>>>its just....excellent.!
best of luck in the contest!!
~Sailor Ptolema
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When it comes to writing haiku...I could not say a word but always Excellent! perhaps I will ask my grandma to teach me how to write a good haiku...it is shame that I a lass coming from the rising sun could not write a perfect haiku.
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A WELCOME MAT
TO HEAVEN'S... DOOR
THAT IS PERFECT
GOD BLESS ALWAYS
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lovely form,as you do so well, good luck in this contest..
Linda
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excellent~
What a beautiful haiku/senyru
Miss ya bunches and a big
for you
I have up a new one too kinda differnt for me
Drop by if you can
Good luck in the contest...
Hugs
Susan~~~
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This is a beautiful haiku/senyru. Lovely imagery. "A welcome mat to heaven's door" Sounds inviting. Thank you for entering.
Kelli -
very beautiful...I was watching them last night...very heavenly
I love the title..
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Like this haiku you have penned and the creative use of space as well. Quite unusual with the gaps....interesting, unique.
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