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Forgiveness's Fur

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Love's purrs
between two fluffy friends,
accepting many differences,
even when one
mistakes the other's food dish
for litter box.

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20 words

A contest entry

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    Lol! AWW! This is soo sweet!
    You have described forgiveness
    and friendship in a cute way.
    Nice write! ♥


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    that's definitely a mistake one doesn't want to make to often.. lol.. I absolutely love this poem, your take on the prompt is excellent.

    good luck

    kat


  • maralisa silver member
    June 25, 2008

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    wow fantastic take on the promt the following lines made me chuckle
    even when one mistakes the other's food dish for litter box.good luck in the contest


  • StarEyes
    June 24, 2008

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    Yep! This is definately something my brother would write! and with his usual wonderful take on the prompt! This is great!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • dustookie2
    June 24, 2008

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    I was saying accidents do happen when i ran under by paws and tails flying across my keyboard and send me off into cyber space. Smile ... a sign of approval to your poem. Brilliant take on the prompt. I think we enjoyed it Good luck in the contest.

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