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Please Murder Me

The Time is near
I feel my fear
don't shared my tears
Murder this lost soul

Now or Never
i can't go on
forever cut my throat
let my shell rot

this lost soul
is no more
they've let me go
therefore i'm no more

Murder this helpless girl
Take my life please
Murder me
watch me die

i'll never cry
never wake again
why this pain
Please Murder me

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  • xXcrimsontearsXx
    June 24, 2008

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    jaded teardrop

    this is an amazing and really well writen piece. i loved the rythme scheme. it fit the piece so well. the imagery was great and the meaning deep. i think almost everybody say's "why this pain" at least once in their lives. or something close to it. i really liked this poem, great job...