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Kill me

My heart is gone
I can't move on
I've been so strong
Not anymore

i just want to go
with dignity
no Sorrow
Just let me go

I'm Crying out kill me
kill me now
i Know there's a way somehow
Please shared my blood now

Please tell me what you think

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  • xXcrimsontearsXx
    June 24, 2008

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    jaded teardrop

    this is a really amazing poem. i loved the ending, where you said, "I know theres a way somehow, please share my blood now." You write amazing poems... great job!