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A Man & A Red Curtain

So simple are these things
A man & a red curtain
But if you look down deeper
And deeper
Maybe you will see
Exactly what is missing
What could it be
What could it be
Ask this question to yourself
Is darkness seeping into this man
Mystery, sweet mystery in his very hand
Looking at what could be
Maybe...a blood stained curtain
But that is uncertain
I'll let you be the judge of it
I hope that you can solve it

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  • completely mad
    June 30, 2008
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    great write here...thanks for entering this