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A Deluge of Ease

Floating jellyfish
schools in a sea of waving grass
basking in gentle breezes

Dancer wades the tide
under touch of grace
laughter teases

Courting the currents
caressing the waves
she reaches out and seizes

The light and warmth
flight and freedom
as the solitude pleases

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 29

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    I love the unique way you penned this wonderful piece
    Lovely are your words
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • maralisa gold member
    June 28
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    wow what a beautiful poem full of beautifully painted images rolling in and out like the traqility of the sea being calm and peachful I realy enjoyed your descriptions in the following lines just wonderful
    Courting the currents caressing the waves
    she reaches out and seizes The light and warmth flight and freedom as the solitude pleases good luck in the contest

  • Beautifully done ~ Loving where you took this prompt ~ best of luck in the contest hun


  • Dygurl
    June 24
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    hmmm warm and relaxing. good luck in your contest.