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Your name my name


When suddenly it starts raining,
Laying in the open wet garden,
The grass starts murmuring softly
Your name and my name

I hear the whispers of the breeze
Sitting beside the window pane
Trying to sing and get involved
Within the tunes of monsoon

And the only words I can make out
From the tapping of drops on the pane
From the songs of the drenched grass
Is your name and my name…


-June 24, 2008

-Neha

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  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 16

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    wow

    loved this one, something about it reminded me of the sound of Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" - just in the cadence and rhythym of the piece. Loved the imagery and the emotional thought in this one.