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Ice Cream

Chocolate, Strawberry,

Vanilla too,

Rocky Road, Pistachio,

and Fudge Delight,

I could eat ice cream all night!

Mint chocolate chip,  Marshmallow Mash,

Chocolate crunch, and Bavarian Whip.

Tons of flavors, Yet all so good,

Try some ice cream in your neighborhood!

 

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  • Melodies
    August 9, 2008

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    Just about killed me, reading this poem about MY FAVORITE FOOD next to chocolate, that is. I love your poem so MUCH... oh my goodness I do love ice cream. Chocolate crunchy stuff with caramel and marshmallows and nuts in it. Oh, I might die.

  • Judith Chandler
    July 26, 2008

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    "Bavarian Whip" is the only one I'm not familiar with. It sounds a bit kinky but ice cream does have that overtone of sin anyway I think. Sinful and innocent at the same time. Love the profusion of all those flavours and love your write.

    Thank you for your entry.

  • PianoMan
    July 17, 2008

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    I LOVE ICE CREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite flavor(oh boy this is hard....). Okay. ONE of my most favorite flavors(one of MANY) is fudge brownie ala mode. Great job!


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Hmmm... I have cravings for ice-cream now!!
    My favourites would have too be... jaffa/mint choc chip / coffee!! (yea, I like coffee ice cream )

    Hmm, need to go find some now
    Great write ^^
    Claire x


  • SilverWolf
    June 25, 2008

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    That is awesome! I love ice cream too. Chocolate and strawberry is my favorite. Please keep writing and someday you will become the new Emily Dickinson. Beautiful poem Sir\Ms. God Bless You Child. Have a nice night.

    Wolf Loner


  • cuteleah
    June 24, 2008

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    i love ice cream too.i love chocolate strawberry vanill too chocolate crunch.my dad loves rocky road. my sister likes mint chocolate chip.


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Ah a kid after my own heart. I just finished a bowl of low-carb Rocky Road, lol! YUMMY! Nice rhyme! Make me wanna go have another scoop.

    Here's a good flavor: Triple Chocolate Brownie Chunk

    Deeeeelish!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Believe me slick, I live for ice cream! This is surely a yummy poem! Makes me want to go out and get some ice cream; in fact I think I will. Thanks for sharing. I love this.
    Brian


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 24, 2008

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    omg

    Wow this made me want ice cream. You described it so well. Tons of flavors and yet you didnt say mine . Great poem its very well written and worded so great. i like it alot.
    ..<3..


  • Kindredblood
    June 24, 2008

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    ice cream many a favorite, awesome poem, so few words yet hitting on a subject many people would like, chills when hot, places a smile where one was not before, ice cream changes many a mood, cool poem.

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